I can see some improvements based on the class feedback. One interesting moment that was lost in the first cut was the serial killer books that the girl picks up in the library. The first cut didn't really focus on it so it's interesting to see that it's there. I do think it works better without it though. It gives away the ending too early.
I can see some improvements based on the class feedback. One interesting moment that was lost in the first cut was the serial killer books that the girl picks up in the library. The first cut didn't really focus on it so it's interesting to see that it's there. I do think it works better without it though. It gives away the ending too early.
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